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[FA] Koe no katachi

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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

First glance at this and I immediately felt the emotions flowing out from those two possible lovers... The expressions are done nicely so that we viewers can understand their feelings without having to know their backstory (forgive me if im wrong...). The strokes are clean and sharp. Body proportions are correct too.
Only one thing troubling me, it's the colour. Maybe it's your own technique...or your own stylings but imo, if you could add just a bit more colour and saturation, of course with shadows to make it pop up more, it will be much better. But if it's your style, then im okay with it. I dont want to change people's own style of drawing.
All in all, kudos for you...op. ( that girl is really cute though <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> )